Paranoid thought bubbles.
New draft, new set of comments. I expect they'll go something like this:
Not 100% sure the whole God-thing is working.
Four decent books out of five really isn't bad going at all.
Oh. Now that you explain it, it makes sense.
On consideration, maybe the last draft was better.
Nevermind. We'll rerelease How I Live Now when the film comes out.